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`OfOneSoul Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You certainly should be proud of this. :la:

I love the wordplay in this, and how your use of punctuation is perfect - it works well with your pacing. I adore the fashion in which you spaced the lines in the middle of sentences. It created and unusual flow that was not only understandable but original. :nod: I don't say that often in poems, but I find it true in this one. You've captured an anger that somehow manages to possess its own sarcastic humor. The last line in particular was... profound.

Wonderful piece. :clap:
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Mood: Joy =Zero2525 Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very nice piece
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$wreckling Jul 17, 2012   Writer
Thank you! :]
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$wreckling Jun 22, 2011   Writer
That means a lot, coming from you. Thanks very much. :]
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*jennystokes May 7, 2011  Professional General Artist
ABSOLUTELY 100% BRILLIANT.
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$wreckling May 7, 2011   Writer
Thank you. :)
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*jennystokes May 8, 2011  Professional General Artist
MY pleasure.
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*RawSunlight May 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
i like it... what more need i say :)
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$wreckling May 7, 2011   Writer
That's plenty in and of itself. Thank you. :aww:
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